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Plans by ThisDyingDog Plans by ThisDyingDog
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Mazelina Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Quite good work, your fur is excellently textured and the concept/ balance quite solid!

My suggestion is to 'fill out' the rump shape a bit more, and that the finger is quite long for the rest of the anatomy. Indeed it appears that the arm itself is a bit incorrectly portioned.

(As similar a pose as I could find atm)
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(Pointing example)
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Another concern is, that despite a lovely shadow beneath the subject and some light shadowing in certain,expected places- there is a lack of 'strong' shading on the rest of the figure. Even a bit may improve the look, as without it the figure feels a but flat and monotone. Just my two cents.

Otherwise Really lovely though, I quite like it!
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